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Really awesome game that teaches the player about patience. 

Art is really awesome and I love the use of the phone app. And London is my favorite character good personality

A few errors in English for me. I would get someone to read this out loud to you to find places where better words can be used. ( If you need me to point them out, I could )

Another feature would be once the text is ready to go next, add an arrow so the player knows that text is over and they won't miss anything by clicking fast. Just a little quality of life feature. A little fail safe if you would. 

Otherwise, 5 stars from me. :)

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Thank you so much for your feedback!! I will definitely try to update the game with an "end of dialogue" icon to let the players know when the text is over : )

Also I would love if you could help me out with some of the wording! I recognize that grammar has never been my strong point so a little help would really go a long way.

If it is easier for you, you can always email me at snackpaigames@gmail.com with your writing edits. If it seems like too much work though I completely understand and I would just like to thank you again for your lovely review!