Thank you so much for your feedback!! I will definitely try to update the game with an "end of dialogue" icon to let the players know when the text is over : )
Also I would love if you could help me out with some of the wording! I recognize that grammar has never been my strong point so a little help would really go a long way.
If it is easier for you, you can always email me at email@example.com with your writing edits. If it seems like too much work though I completely understand and I would just like to thank you again for your lovely review!