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Thank you for playing! Really glad that you and your girlfriend enjoyed It despite some grammar mistakes! Grammar is my worst enemy, I'm trying my best to fix it in my next project lol

In the second chance ending, Haruto is alive because Ichigo is so distraught with Aimi's murder and all, so Haruto escaped to Tokyo in time (I kind of recently created some sort of what-if story for Haruto, that he became a detective after this ending and is hell bent on trying to catch Ichigo in the future)

I honestly forgot that I only said that Haruto would be alive only in the ending where the MC kills Ichigo (because if I said that then don't mind my past self, it's been a while and I sort of don't remember stuff LMAOO, I'm sorry for any inconsistencies). It's definitely the only ending where Haruto and Yuzuki is alive though, yes. And you're definitely right in thinking that Haruto would be alive in the MC suicide endings as well.

But thank you for the questions and all! I hope you'll enjoy For Amerta as well whenever you decide to play it! :D

Knice1 year ago

When we started the game, we enjoyed that Ichigo's name seemed to match with the color of the fruit. So we restarted our playthrough and named our main character "Ume" after plum. We also laughed after Googling "Yuzuki" and finding out he was also named after a fruit. I also wonder, does the MC's default name, Aimi, have any significance? What about Haruto's name?

My girlfriend says that she would be willing to make an exhaustive list of the grammar issues if you are interested. She enjoys editing as well as proofreading, and we both enjoyed your VN so much we want to help polish it!

sylvan1 year ago

Oooh, Ume for plum is a really adorable name for MC! For Aimi, the particular kanji I chose for her name is 愛美 and I believe that means "beautiful love" since she's so obsessed with the idea of romance and all. As for Haruto, I honestly chose his name because Haruto is an extremely common name in Japan LMAO. The kanji I chose for his name is 遥都, which I believe means "distant city", just to reference his goal of escaping to a far away city and away from Ichigo.

Oh whoa! Thank you so much for the offer! Honestly, the help would be very appreciated. I'd like to tell you in advance that I currently don't have any budget put aside for game development purposes. If your girlfriend doesn't mind about that, then I'd be happy to take the offer!

Knice1 year ago

I see, that's really interesting.

She says that she's willing do it for free. Unfortunately when she launches the game on her mac, the game crashes when she tries to open the options menu.

"Start" and "Load" seem to work fine though and it seems like she's able to play the game just fine otherwise.

Also she asks if you have a writeup of the entire game's script to make it easier for her to look through.

sylvan1 year ago (1 edit)

Thank you for the help! Once again, I really do appreciate it!

Oh that error is news to me, I'll see if I can do something about the issue when I get to my computer later.

My writeup for the entire script is in the code. Could I ask for your/your girlfriend's email address so I can send it there? (or contact me via my email: hope.asasin@gmail.com)

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