The part that impressed me the most is the visuals! They are very appealing and beautiful, the intro scene was really well designer, the effects and the welcoming into the world. I think there was a sudden shift of tone with the music right after the entrance it was a bit jarring at the beginning, but then as the game begins to flow we are caught back on by the visual style.
I think overall the game has potential!
Suggestions:
-I feel like the music at the beginning was a sudden shift, maybe a bit more somber or mysterious music would do better as a transition for the initial scene.
-A bit less wandering would help as well, I found myself lost some times, is not bad to have some linear objectives right away.
Overall with a bit more polish I think the game would be elevated quite a bit!