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I've liked a lot what I've read so far of the VN. However there are a LOT of misspellings and Grammar mistakes, you should really consider getting someone else to check your scripts to clean them up and correct those mistakes. It would give the VN more quality and reduce the quantity of the mistakes. Also you should consider opening a comment section it the VN site.

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Thank you for the feedback. I am doing this VN all by myself and as I release upcoming updates I always go over the entire script of my novel, and even then there’s bound to be some grammar and spelling mistakes that slips through the cracks.  If there’s a mistake I may miss readers just report them to me. As for the comment section, I will think about have a comment section on the VN site if it becomes more of a popular request. 😁😉✌🏽 thanks again for you feedback and glad you enjoyed the story so far.