Hey! I played it a few days ago and I wanted to collect my thoughts before commenting!
So, first and foremost: it was beautiful! The voice-acting, the art, the GUI, wow!!! I think I don't have the right words: but the eyes and ears would say it all!
Also, regarding the story... I really felt like I was talking with Norah, in the chill air of the night. I have to admit I didn't fully understand the story, but I had theories in mind (going as crazy as "Norah is Ashe from the future"... not sure it makes much sense, but that's what I had in mind)!! But I did enjoy the ambiguity... It was foggy, like amnesia or the night, in the end...
So, congrats for a first game! I would never have guessed it if it weren't written on this page! It was so good!!! I'm looking forward to more of your work!!!