Very beautiful game, with gameplay that seems simple but has a bit more depth than what is visible at first glance. My only problem is the "tutorial", which is just a wall of text with the information drowned by lore. I started reading, got frustrated by not finding what I was looking for, and left after the second paragraph. I tried something similar in my entry to be honest, but I did two things to make it more palatable in my opinion: I kept it relatively short, and I highlighted the important point that were related to gameplay so players who don't want to read can still grab the essential information (it's not perfect by any means though.)
Anyway, I know I rambled more about a tiny negative point than the good things, but I do think you did a fantastic job!