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You're right again. XD Apologies. It keeps auto-ticking the box to make it run in browser, I assume because its an html file.

Regardless, I tweaked it and got scroll functionality working at the very least.

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Good to see, looks like it's working now!

Overall, it's a very nice short bit of horror-themed writing, but I think the paragraphs could use a break or two between some sentences here and there.

:) Awesome! I'll modify modify those to make it more readable. Thank you again for the feedback.

Are there any passages you would identify as particularly strong or weak?