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In this early stage it doesn't really make sense to invest in the services of a translator. My writing is the key point where I'm looking for feedback, so once I'm confident in that I'd be happy to make it more accessible to new audiences.

:) Awesome! I'll modify modify those to make it more readable. Thank you again for the feedback.

Are there any passages you would identify as particularly strong or weak?

You're right again. XD Apologies. It keeps auto-ticking the box to make it run in browser, I assume because its an html file.

Regardless, I tweaked it and got scroll functionality working at the very least.

Thanks for letting me know, mate. Never used itch before, so learning as I go right now. I'll check the settings and see what I can do as soon as I can.

Edit: I removed the "[Run in browser]" option so it should just be a tiny little download.