Nice work on the update! For the new endings, I suggest not eliminating those locations from the game when you find her there to make it easier for players to discover them. That change will also fix the bug where the game stops working after all of the locations have been checked.
I spotted a few other bugs. Going through dialogue too quickly can garble the text in the next dialogue window. The option button associated with the easter egg appears twice. The dialogue orientation probably shouldn't flip when the player character is speaking since it ends up looking odd when new text appears.
I'm happy to see that you have decided to do more with this game, thank you for expanding it!