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A wholesome and well written story! I really enjoyed the bite-sized presentation of it, with the text in the center and animated illustrations to anchor it. That setup does a lot to keep readers engaged without feeling overwhelmed! The only potential area of improvement in that regard is maybe a slightly thicker font, though it can be zoomed in the browser.

I really like what you're doing with the limited color palette. In most text adventures this wouldn't be the case, but since every action you take is illustrated, I think that pictures for the sexual encounters may be something that players will expect to see.

There was a bug that showed up in both of the browsers that I tried using. At first I thought that the story choice options just didn't always appear when they should, but later I realized that they were just out of the scroll frame with a small margin on top that could still be clicked. I was still able to play though the story, but I don't know all of the choices that I made.

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thank you, impy! the bug you mentioned is a known thing with the language ink, because the way it includes images creates a weird space buffer. (there are ways around it, and i have janky ideas of my own, but i ran out of time this time.) but with just one image per chunk, you were missing, at most, like, part of one line. no whole choices, thankfully.