Thanks for the reply. :)
To Will - It was hilarious how Connor reacted to his own previous work after Will's lesson. :) The "I was writing porn the entire time! It showed so much I'm a horny virgin!" depression (for the lack of better word) was really funny, one of the best parts. One of the things that made him really feel as a human, real, actual young character with feelings, self-doubt etc.
I also really liked the famous guy for how he has layers too. That he's insecure about being in the uni just because of privilege of being a star while the other students proved their talent by passing the entry exams. He's also hot. ;)
Also, nice touch with only straight guys wearing boxers - it's SO true! :)
After finishing the game more than once, with all 3 possible outcomes (I hope I haven't missed any), my only gripe with the game is Connor's "problem" in the end. Is such thing really possible? I've never heard of it and I really don't know how to feel about it, I expected "happier" ending. :) But other than that, really great work!
If the next update is good and the game seems more "finished" after that, you'll be the first creator ever I'll donate money to.
Oh yeah, not getting a "happy ending" your first time is something that happens to a lot of guys. It's nerves that turns into anxiety over something being wrong, and once that sets in, it becomes difficult to stay focused and in the mood. It made sense to me to go that way for Connor's first time considering how panicked he was earlier in the day and how quickly the hookups happened.
There are a couple of scenarios where he can finish, and those share in common that he's much more comfortable with where he's at during those times. There are two of those in the current version, if you haven't found them yet.
If you skip the hookups in this section and have a first time later on in the game, he won't have the same problem because in those scenarios he'll be much more at ease. But those scenes are yet to come. No pun intended 😉
Anyway, thank you again for the kind words! At the end of the day this game is basically about building your own fantasy, whether that be hookups or romances or both. But I wanted to add layers of reality to ground things. Like having a young writer panic about the quality of their writing, haha
As I said, I found 3.
***SPOILER***
Disclaimer: I'm really bad with names, so I don't remember any except for Connor and Marco. :)
There are two more hookup/hookup-adjacent endings aside from those. For the first, do the same steps you did to get to #1, but turn down Marco's proposition. When you're given the option to jack off after that, do so, but don't go to Marco's bed (that will just segue into the sex scene). Instead JO together in your own beds. You can reach this same ending via #3 if you turn down his proposition while jacking off together.
For the second, do the same steps leading to #3, but take your shirt off instead of going home. It can lead to two versions of a hookup scene with one of the guys there.
