Hi Ony :)
I am doing alright and hope you too, I think it is a nice gesture of you to translate Puqffal and Myx bittersweet into your language and it sure a good thing for the visual novel itself, not everyone knows English or English well enough to play all the games on Itchio. I would translate my own visual novel into my language (or try to find other languages) if I knew how to set the language settings in Ren'py, I checked about it before and it is way too complicated for me.
I am glad my ratings on games helps you :)
For Yumi's Dream, after killing Selene and exiting the castle we are supposed to go back to the main town for a last event scene in the headquarter and the game stops when the player is ready to leave the island by boat.( the sea below the main town where there are rocks) for now as I did not make anything else after, Um the life reducer was an idea of Alexanda, it might make things too easy..if we keep them and all, no idea if I should just remove them from the game or not.
The battle between Yumi and Selene was harder at first then I thought to make it easier in case people would complain about it, in my own point of view I made the whole game too easy on battles, I do not know what everyone that played thinks? maybe I will just put back the difficulty I thought at the beginning, I am not really sure what to do. For now I will try to continue the story further and see difficulty after.
I have not been able yet to get back into continuing the story but I will try to get on it soon, I am feeling down with various stuff but I do not want to give up on it.
Once I will get back into continuing the game, I will make a (probably) small world map with a few other areas and all, I have not fully thought about everything yet.
I am glad you liked the short story of the knight Marina, that took me a while to write and check mistakes even though there might be some mistakes yet? That stays in my mind for maybe a short rpg maker game later.


And thank you very much to have taken the time to play Yumi's Dream :)