Hello, I'm glad you enjoyed it! ๐
"Led eyes upon" is actually correct grammar, I didn't mean for it to be "Laid eyes upon". I'll try to look for the missing h part haha ๐
Dripping dialogue was only used about 4 times in the demo but I went and saw that it was all towards the end so I understand why it felt like a lot.
I have a "report bugs" form on the pinned post on my tumblr blog, if you find anything else like typos then let me know! Thank you.