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It work on my phone, and up to date android runnin' one. What doesn't work is the resolution. For whatever reason it always swaps the screen to portrait: too wide. Doesn't rotate or load-into landscape.
great update, and great story as usual!
could use a pass by an editor-inclined pal or so, if you can wrangle any. Nothing massive, grammar, inconsistancies, the odd typo. doesnt ruin the experience though.
that's fair. but as a player i feel like it was a bit silly on an abrupt false end when the game seems to very-much not be the type. you could raise the stakes into a situation where the clear choice is like.. handcuffs or worse? leaves the bpc making that choice, and leaves it in a plausable place for "well I've come THIS far may as well keep truckin. I'll stop backseat writing now lol, your stuff is great i am just
critiqing nitpicking 👌 thanks for sharing your stuff with us
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I stumbled onto this somrwhere else, an older version too. I thought i liked how... you added an option to turn down the ride home. But then I saw you really didn't, did you. was wondering how the mc gets drawn in without that, but that's the rub, huh? pretty railroady. is the illusion of choice sliding us into false ends going to be a recurring thing?
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most major IF platforms support mobile for a reason. (twine, choiceofgames, ink, even workarounds for renpy games thay dont native-support mobile). it'd be a nice chunk of the market you'd be catering to~
tried on mobile, and the background swaps from white to black when one scrolls down to read. black text on a black bg soooo....
and then I see the choice buttons just fine way at the bottom lol
it's a super nice read but it feels like half a story. ambiguous endings are fine but
... I dunno, a bit abrupt for having so much up in the air still y'know? Ends on a bit of an uncertain-yet-somber vibe...
just my hot takes. nice touch adding timestamps when they swap to disc lol
i enjoyed it RIGHT UP UNTIL the "secret technique".
I have relatively recent experience with similar enough, when i was in the hospital. They said they could hear my shouts of pain from the halls, and i am no stranger to wacky pain. 💀
Still a nice read!
💜😌 kindof-rant incoming, but shamelessly posting it anyways because I am very much in the (assumed) target audience of dorky folk in a certain age range? maybe? so yknow, biased AF.
From the active choice to develope as what is essentially a Gameboy game, to the inclusion of meme easter eggs that, even we folk were jamming to when fresh, were half forgotten and out of mind for... maybe years(?) before seeing again here (in glorious 8-bit!), to the endearing characters and dialog it's mega clear you poured a lot of what you love, of yourselves into this, and can't wait to play any more you put out. Definitely stalking your itch dev page for future endeavors too.
Objectively well designed too. Puzzles felt just right, map layouts felt good, aethetics, etc.
I bet you fnife folks are p cool crew. 😎