Hello. I downloaded, printed out and read this game and I thought it was a great concept, but... I thought you spent too much time on why you were writing it for the game jam and not enough on why I should play the game and how. The first part about the game jam could be dramatically reduced or put into a note at the end. Also I thought there was too much about how to play an RPG, and the philosophy behind this game and gaming in general, and not enough on how to play the game itself. Again, I loved the concept and want to sit down and play it, but I thought you made me work a bit to get to that point!
Thanks for the great idea!