Thank you for the incredibly insightful and kind comments on Bad Faith's story - and I apologize for the late reply! ^^; I'll give my thoughts below.
It's interesting, huh? How both Magda and Nils had violent revenge against the people who treated them poorly - but they both processed it differently.
Nils gained catharsis from violently destroying the Haven because their body was harvested for energy and food against their own will - and they nearly died from Lady Amaris' cruel treatment. Consequently, they have no attachment to the island and the people who live on it.
On the other hand, Bad Faith is told from Magda's POV. Because Magda isn't a violent person, we, the reader, see her and Nils' revenge as unsettling and dissatisfying. Bad Faith's ending is also dissatisfying because Magda didn't find peace in a way that suited her. (In addition, Magda has a personal attachment to the Haven, so seeing her home destroyed will leave her with difficult feelings anyways.)
I feel like I'm writing a long stream-of-consciousness post here, but I hope what I said makes sense! ^^; Again, thank you for the incredibly kind words - and I hope I can make even more awesome commercial works in the future...