I know I've donated already! But I may just have to do it again in a few more updates! (in which case both donations counted as one in all for this VN), I will gives my thoughts in reply to this message, so hold your tonuge for now! XP
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Starting from the top, I am more amazed than I should be by one sprite suddenly having a whole body shift for emotion! Electrifying! Ok now that is a silly one! XD
Oh yes that grin is nice on you! >X3 Weird colored doggo with fur patterns and "gloves", sure your not talking about me? XD and damn stop teasing me! XP Could at least put on a shirt! (this is now reoccurring "inside" joke, not to mention I'm one to talk when my sona doesn't even wear clothes at all! but that part is least hidden... XD) (one of those things that drives you crazy but also makes you feel good X/3)
Chance to talk more? Exhausting, but good to be able to do so! When there is time fur it, better use that time wisely!
But I like cake! D: XD
Still love the deadpan humor! XD
That is a shocked/horror hybrid expression if I ever seen any! Its all caked and dried! Oh this scene seems familiar!... As far as the Two CGs are concerned, only have to make those bits about half the size, who knew cosmetics were so advanced? XP
Oh wow O.O did not expect this, but at same time I feel like it is a blessing.. and a curse! But that is just it!
Uhm I thought it was supposed to be a small ball, not a paw sized ball???
Woah, now that is bonus points! Never ceases to amaze me just how much music out here I haven't heard/that is also unique from anything else I have heard!
Aha I knew it! And wow, version 3.0 is better than ever! HOLY ^&*& 80%!?! *jawdrops*
Well that is a brutal way of doing things, but I see the Original tie in, perfect! ... And this is what happen when you get all 7 emeralds!!!
Oh! adjust so Yukine's sprite disappears when he follows Sheppy!
I'm thinking maybe 1 Chapter per major Arcana, with any minors sprinkled in as and/or if needed. If 23 chapters is too much, by doing 2 per chapter you will only have about 13 chapters (since first and last are linked, and one of the remainder would be odd one out, assuming I have counted right). In the end you will find a way to make them revolve around events that are linked to the characters. Save a planet and purify another!
Hehe this was a funny read and I am sorry I did not get back to you sooner, itch.io sucks at pinging me when comments happen. Yeah this update was a heck of a time to make, but I am super glad everyone is enjoying it as much as I had making it. The overall consensus so far is to have 23 chapters in total but we shall see if some get meshed together or not. Lots more coming and even crazier things to see!