Oh I just love the way its written, the story is smooth, but its the character themselves that area tad cryptic in their owns quirky ways!~
Have to say though I feel like them joking there would be perfect for a CG at some point. (As in add it in at a later date, should you choose to do so)
Also... hehe... https://www.furaffinity.net/view/29919187/ a stupid pun / joke sort of related ^^; X3
Dreamy parts really feel so dreamy.... hmm... hmm...
Talk about being out of your element! facepaw