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This VN is awesome and very cutes characters, but about this last version one (0,51) (A little spoiler) sorry but it sucks a little -_- I was forward about watch the first Axel and Dom route's day but I only saw a neverending dialogues between main character with Tai and Russell and nothing more else, thats all . Me : WHAT? O.O, I felt a little dissapointed and boring, several months waiting for this route, almost a first interaction with Axel or Dom and nothing about that happenned :`( . Dude it sucks. Please, please, the next version less boring dialogue and more interaction with the main characters in that route 

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Its not my fault if you continued read my comment when I wrote cleary in bracket SPOILER, Its your own mess, not mine, the next time beware with the word SPOILER or read other comments if you dont like some of those, some people have the right to write which each of us our sensation or constructive opinion if we want or give some point if it helps. I am free write whatever I want always with respect, but you are the one have not any right tell me what thing I have write or not, its not about your bussiness. If you dont like, dont read more comments then dude

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Ok ok whatever you say. 

You begin complain for my opinion and now you try reverse roles, oh dammit, dont make me laugh please , dont be ridiculuous, its clearly you should be boring and prefer start an argument with somebody with the excuse one about read something you dont like, if you throw a complain to someone before to read all comment at first is your shit, not mine, smartass.

And again I write or comment any thing I want and you are nobody for critize that, if you annoying for that the problem is your, i'll pass waste more time for inmature chat.

Anyway, happy new year 

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It was interaction with a main character in the route. It just so happens that this route has a few unexpected surprises up it's sleeves. In the art of storytelling, setup is necessary for the payoffs to feel earned and rewarding, and if you always get given exactly what you expect, that would get horribly boring and predictable. Good things take time, so be patient and enjoy the journey. What you're looking for will come, but there's a story involved, so at least give us the opportunity to set that in motion before you complain about it.

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I understand, you are right, sorry if I could sound a little rude its not my intention, only it was a little perception mine but I could be wrong, whatever I dont know if each version are monthly or each 3 months or so and I was so look forward for a new day with Axel or Dom, but I like your work and you have a great work with this project, I hope the next version look forward. Thanks for your answer and merry Christmas and new year :)

The last update was 2 weeks ago, but releases vary. These initial scenes set the stage for things to come, and Russell has a huge part to play in this story - it wouldn't function without him. There'll be plenty of Axel and Dom from day 7 onward,

All the other routes have you immediately spending time with the love interest, and I like to think that this one is unique for doing something different. It does a lot of things differently from the others, such as not having a traditional villain character, and of course tackling the subject and logistics of polyamory. Just be patient, these things take time. We're only at the very beginning, and a unexpected surprises need to happen in order to set the story in motion. Just be aware that the next update will be the same, so maybe hold off on that one until we add some chapters in day 6. 

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I get that you didn't enjoy the update because it wasn't action packed but I think that's how most stories/movies/shows/books start. They gotta build the foundations to get you immersed into it and then when they add in drama or action you understand why that character would react in that way. I think it's also because in literature you structure your stories normally containing exposition, conflict, rising action, climax, falling action and finally a resolution (sometimes). Whether or not this update was good comes down to your own individual opinion and this is not intended to attack your opinion. However it should be noted that this story is still a work in progress and I'm sure you do love Sileo: Tales of a New Dawn since you said "Please, please, the next version..." which to me is indicating that you're staying tuned for more because you're interested in the stories potential.

You're right. I could understand that when the creator explain me that before, sorry if I seemed annoyed before but I really wasn't so. Perhaps I was too excited when I realize a new route finally started that I waiting too since first day and then I dissapointed in that moment, but I can see that works have its progress and its steps. I will wait carefully but ansioux the next updates. Axel and Dom are too cute and I love watch more about their route soon