I think the art is great but a bit inconsistent in terms of style, the storyline is somewhat too intense, theres no rollback function, and there isn't an ability to change modes when you lock it in.
But one of the main issues is that you can't load your saves in the menu. You have to go through loading a mew game and THEN will you be able to access your journal. Another one is not enough spicy scenes. I get it, a great game needs some depth, but this game offers nsfw capabilities, so I really think more nsfw scenes should be added to the game (all natural mode doesn't cut it, although, it is a great idea! Definitely keep it.) My final thought is a step by step guide on how to get close enough to each character. I feel like it could help many of us out.
Some great points you hit are your writing abilities. I would bet that you took college courses on writing if you ended up with this amount of skill. Another one is the depth of the game. Like, holy shit, this is deeper than the mu-fuggin Mariana Trench. I personally don't like it, but someone else definitely will! (If you could make an easy going mode and an in depth mode, that would be great as well!) The art is superb, even if it is a bit inconsistent. You have cartoon characters over here and then detailed characters over there, but never do they look bad. All of them look amazing all the time.
This doesn't mean I'll stop playing though. I kind of like the detail this game goes into. It makes me feel like I actually have a crime syndicate in my town that I need to worry about and/or involve myself in sooner or later.
Obviously, I know my critiques and criticisms might blow over your head since you have a lot on your plate. That or you don't have any care for them. I'm not asking you to fulfill my wishes, I wouldn't do that unless I was commissioning a game. I simply wish to submit my ideas and response to the game.
Great game. Would recommend. 8/10 from me.