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It is a type of review and

What i get from this avn,

Spoiler will be there for sure


I absolutely adore and love this mc,only few avn has such good looking, Manly, knows his shit and ain't a perv teenager type.

He has billions of dollars but still humble and treats everyone good and does simple jobs for living,a man with character who even doesn't leave a one night fling girl on road when she needs him.

But i don't like li jaye at all,hear me out,

Don't think i hate Jaye, she's good looking but else nothing good about her,she dates with a gay(i mean sure she can be wierdo but not more than that,right?),who tries to rape her,i mean what do u expect after dating a weirdo,off course he will take what he wants,you should be stupid to think that he will not do anything,but mc stopped him from doing so.

Don't take me as pyscho but that would have been good,not because rape is good from any pov but because she throws shit at mc,instead of her rapist and even tried to defend his gay bf action,like wow great you deserved it bitch.

Then mc left her for her doing all this nonsense and she still doesn't do a damn thing and when he returned acted like a jealous bitch,like seriously? Was he supposed to be your loyal pet or something? You treats him like shit and he left as a real man,but you still blames him?

Even in story at no point we can blame Jaye for all this, but only can accept her shit lies and ridiculous stupid execuses for doing all that shit, instead of putting that bitch into her place.

That's all what she do with only good mc,rarest in avn,but she is more ridiculous that this,she is a lesbian and using her innocent friend for pleasure who also puts up with her shit as friend,and ain't a lesbian like jaye.

She doesn't work or anything and just live off on money of MCs mom,like seriously bitch you can steep more low?

And now she wants to run the company,like what she did for it?she wants all the money,yeah take it,mc is humble enough to leave all the money for a slut like you,why put mc into your shit?

She treats people like her slave,like with her gay bf,she brought him to ship from airport just to humiliate him,he asked for forgiveness but she brought him to be beaten down by mc,getting similar vibes, yup that's happened in past too,she just uses everyone around her,and when things go South she blames other.

I don't see any reason that she's a good li type,she is more of ridiculous bitch who's is nothing more than a slut,who just loves herself and nobody else.

Her friend is 1000000 times better than her if i would want to marry between them i would always choose her friend.

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I think you completely misread Jaye, Christian was *never* Jaye's Boyfriend.

I think you need to replay those scenes and actually read the dialogs a little more closely. Because she very clearly mentions that she felt sorry for Christian after having met him in the school's infirmary with injuries from being mistreated by his father for being gay (recall when she points out 'cigarette burns'). And getting thrown out of his home for it. Then Jaye mentions that she felt sorry for him and invited him to her home to give him a chance to vent about his problems, and then that's when things got 'dicey'. 

As for her attitude, I think the story writer really did his homework on the psychological behaviors of people and how some deal with rejection and sexual/emotional tensions. I've personally witnessed similar events before, just not between actual siblings (not that Jaye and MC are actual siblings, I'm not sure how siblings with ZERO blood relations are considered as actual siblings. But for the sake of the story I'll let it slide hehe). And I think she is very well depicted. And her behavior checks-out. 

Also, about her relationship with Tara (her best friend), Tara is not gay and neither is Jaye. Again, I strongly urge you to go through the story once more and actually pay closer attention to the dialog details.

as for Jaye being lazy and not working, you really missed alot of text haven't you? because again she points out she worked as a barmaid. I don't know how you can even remotely conclude that she leaches off her parents for money, but that strangely sounds like work to me....

If you play the game constantly skipping ahead by mashing the "CTRL" button, I can understand how you ended up in china using a map for Australia!  Just sayin'.

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hey dear good sir you have some solid points,and maybe it's either I missed to type other errors or they are true so you didn't had an explanation for those,it's good since i can't take Jaye shit at all,it feels nice that i was right about her.

My point still stands,you don't love someone and just goes completely mad at them for reading your dairy,maybe when it's personal some could but off course she will throw shit and overreact at age of 8, something you can understand kids thing,but it lasted for 10 years? Yeah comedy right.

About bf part i think here you are the one at the wrong end,it was already mentioned by mc that she was dating that dude Christian and definitely didn't brought him out of sympathy she clearly also mentioned that Christian wasnt sure with his sexuality so he tried to force himself on her for that,and mc saved her,let's say you're a completely bloke head and the guy who saved you is your enemy but still who will you support your savior or your rapist?

Here this bitch just lost any empathy or explanation that could be given in in future to have a reasonable relationship with her from my side, taking her shit,trying to adjust with her.

So she basically sided with her rapist to throw her shit at mc,whom she loved? I guess nowadays love is joke or something,since love meaning is changed to throw your partner in the pit,i guess?

And it's not like she was never nice to others too,like when that Christian met Jaye at airport to appologize for it,she basically brought him on ship to be thrown out by mc,to get him humiliated and not dirty her own hands,good move bitch.

And basically what i make up of it,that bitch for sure wanted property of her parents all alone,reason why she did all this nonsense to get mc out of house,wtf she did to try to bring him back? And yeah just act as angry on mc for every fucking reason so why not here,she just acted like she's angry at him so even if he return(which she never wanted off course,in reality) but then either mc out up with her shit and apologize for Jaye mistakes to her,so she feels superior or she shows her true colours.

Now you will argue with nonsense like he bloked her no. Or something,but for sure that ain't the case,like when she phoned him to inform about parents death,how the fuck she called him? That's either mistake or just shit reasoning later for Jaye never calling,and what about her not coming with parents to meet him?so she was angry for shouting at someone for no reason and siding with her own rapist,rather than with her savior,and brother,and than making him ran away from house and instead of feeling for him and having any guilt to make him leave, she's just doing her bitchy thing of acting as innocent, it's either she's having bad acting skills or superior class.

About her sweet friend,Tara,only character i absolutely adore in this avn other than mc,i never said she's gay,i said how much innocent she is who not only put up with Jaye shit but also keep smiling after being used by her as sex toy,why not Jaye become a prostitute? Rather than using sweet Tara?why not earn with helping yourself at same time? That's where her ego come and her nonsense personality to think she is superior to others.

Basically whole point of avn is either we put up with her bitchness things and subside it and accept her with 1000000 flaws or she become our first enemy if we don't appologize everytime for no reason,well that's situation with your lover,but most of them aren't even half like jaye,she's extremely too dull if you look inside the context and beautiful if you just see her outside beauty.

This avn is wierd but only good aspect is mc,but when you make someone good you have to make him half beta(for no fucking reason) he's too good sometimes for his own good,like letting that girl just live off in his house,i don't recall names much but the girl he fucks in starting if avn,so he's just too innocent and we were made to believe it's Jaye, but she ain't good for anything,you justified her something,but it's just one big error which takes your whole life good credit and here she didn't had any already so she's basically off the list.

Why this much hate? No I am not spreading any and like i said i love this avn,but if main li isn't good and she's only one available WTF i coan do? Rather than asking for some justification of her character,in the end i didn't liked her personality at all,Tara is million times better than her and no not because she already slept with mc or has some real feelings for mc not fake like jaye one which switches on and off every time,but because she's sacrificing all that for someone like Jaye,still keep smiling after being used by her,and if someone keep up with shits like jaye that's for sure a greater person than i could ever be.

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Thx for at least taking the time to read my comment. And I could spend alot of time picking at what I think you're wrong about, but I don't think that would be productive as we're all allowed to interpret the story line and character arcs as we wish. So Instead of pointing out more obvious misreads, I'll be perfectly happy with "agreeing to disagree" with you. 

I respect that you yield the results that are most logical for you. Either way, I'm sure we'll still find plenty to enjoy out of it regardless.  I just hope you're still able to enjoy the rest of the story. 

As for me, I just love Jaye, and all other chars. I even love to hate Christian even if I suspect his role will be pivotal and actually change MC's opinion of him in the next chapter. just a suspicion I have. The writers are crafty buggers.  ;)

In any case, thanks for the exchange of opinions. 

peace.

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