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you are right bud, I'm genuinely sorry for coming too harsh on you,yeah i can try to be more polite toward others,even though i won't say my attitude can be changed suddenly,but at least i will try in future to be less harsh when complaining about something.

And thanks for commenting and giving your pov on things which i realise many don't give a fuck actually,but you do truly,

I shouldn't be coming harsh towards you who genuinely put a lot of effort in making this avn,and put your ass out at work to create something this amazing.

I absolutely adore the part that side character has a real character and story and main lis are actually loving type with some story for them,which is best part and what makes your avn different from others.

About mc thing yeah he develops for better,he became from 10% to 25% of character,but you can't say that he's became something great,......  yet ,I don't know if u are looking to make him more better in future.

He was actually much better in his past before the start of story,from the stories told about his past,he sounded much better character,he genuinely cared for his mom,and took care of her when she needed him instead of running behind girls and all,like other teenager do at that age,he didn't even cared for his personal life or girl who was all over him in love,but just took care of his mom,he was a great guy in past.

But from start of story even till the end of season 1,i didn't found something like huge improvement in his character,he's still too naive,don't know anything type,everyone still hiding things from him,and worst part he doesn't even care about that part,like yeah you can be stupid and people don't want to spill the beans,but he doesn't even try to find the things which are hidden from him, WTF is wrong with you? Just love to be clueless idiot or what,mc?

He's not some loser,i will give you that,but isn't in story he's supposed to be some sort of God? Not asking to make him a dictator who forces everyone to do things according to his liking but at least give him some authority,but he's a clueless naive child,whereas even his maid's or servants knows much more than he can ever even the end of avn.

About cry baby part,i didn't say he is  one, because even though he has cried 3 times in the avn and out of that only 2 times it  was okay,there was point for crying those 2 times,third time was meh and pointless but still i didn't want to point that part,since it was okay,even males shows emotion sometimes,we aren't ruthless killers,at least not all.

And he's even though being god like powerful and all still afraid that a girl half of his size will beat him up,like acting to make others happy on their joke of them beating him up is okish,but him literally shitting in pants whenever his own harem girls threaten him as joke,is hilariously and shows mc is pussy and that happened 4-5 Times in story even till the end of part 1.

Him running for help from his mom over every 5 min,is just a big no,he is supposed to be adult but still does things of a 7 years old boi would do,he was shown far better in past stories of his life.

Yes you have improved a lot in your writting skills and story from first chapter towards the end,mc has became a bit better but still he isn't something people would like to be in shoe of,he's still somewhat dumb, naive and totally clueless and most he's a pussy,imagine if a manly guy confront or threatens him,i m sure he will run for his mommy as he is  shown till now like as a wussy guy.

Here's what you can do to improve for future,hiding things to build up or if you want to make changes to those in future is good,but the thing that only mc is clueless naive child and else even an outsider knows more than him,makes it feel like playing as a dumbass,you could put it like others all got to know after the story moves on instead of them Knowing everything and leaving only mc in his own delusion.

Trust me that's what would be best,rest all things will take more time and effort and will still not be resolved,i analysed and main issues people have in anywhere is playing in shoe of a clueless and totally dumb main character,that's what people actually want to whine about.

Rest all issues are okay but being totally dumb and doesn't know anything is a turn off,since many can easily find out what's behind the curtains.

And i came this harsh to you was because i was already too much pissed after playing over 100 avn where mc is naive,stupid dumb bitch,perv teenage,doesn't knew a shit and living in his own delusion and with stupidiest problems to deal in life.

And now i m taking a big leap of break from playing any avn because in truth i have already played most and not much  remained to play,at least not good ones though,i have seen may and played most and biggest issue was always dumb mc for me,like 99.95% of avns have them so not your fault at all for me quitting this all.