I cannot rate your game because I just have continues join the Brackeys and BTP Game jam and have a break Sunday and Monday. But I love your 3D Model and its great dialogue system and storyTelling.
If you can change the UI button and change the UI text little bigger it would be better.(I am not sure is that my resolution problem. I downloaded it and feel the button a little small. If its my problem, Plz ignore it)
I cannot wait to see your continue make this game. Very talent I can see from your game~