On the other post I've added my playthrough, that said here are my thoughts:
-Quite good idea, combining storytelling with cooking feels fresh.
-Conversations are quite interesting but I would need a bigger "sample" to know if every story is going to be carried like this one.
-Gameplay mechanics are pretty good and adding elements through the development of the story and conversations is a good way to implement progression into the game.
-Visually the game looks quite nice, some polish here and there and it would be awesome ^^
In conclusion, the idea is great and I hope you keep working on it. Hopefully this is useful for the development :D
Regards