This may have been very short, but it was beautifully done. I have a thing for that effect around the edges, it's a nice touch but only in games that look as good as yours did. Wonderful textures and lighting, a bit dark but most indie horror games are these days.
The one thing I'd say is to maybe cut down the text in the beginning instead of them going back and forth so many times and enlarge the font if you can. Also have some audio underneath that leads into the part in the house instead of silence or something to give the text just as much atmosphere as you put into the rest of the game. Very good job and good luck with future projects!