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Nice patch and nice minis!

I haven't painted in a while, but I still have a few boxes of Warhammer Fantasy sets lying somewhere...
Update looks nice, I'll check it out next week when I can.

Something that's worth looking into is the aged up character sprite proportions and blood-stains. She looks like she's wearing the biggest push-up bra ever made. I'm all for having sex appeal in games, but I think it looks more like two balloons under her dress than anything - doesn't feel natural. I'm not good at anatomy/drawing so I can't really offer any good ideas there.

Another thing is the blood stain position. The one right above her lip looks a bit out of place, as if it's not really connected to her face curvature. Perhaps flip it vertically so it's perpendicular to her mouth?

Really the only reason why I'm noticing these issues is since this used as a promo screenshot in this devlog, which is what grabs a player/reader's attention, and having these issues could be what makes or breaks someone's willingness to try the game out. They don't bother me since I know what the game is like and I don't need to be convinced to play it, but I can imagine someone looking at it and saying "oh, a porn game, no thanks" or something. I think they're probably quick fixes, should you decide to address this.

Keep up the good work!

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Thanks. Character sprites are something I'm still fighting with. I'm toying with. Trying to improve both the anatomy, face and materials. I'm not very good at it, but it's getting better.

Wounds are also something that needs more work. I made one set for age 10 and then I just lazily copied them over to other ages without acounting for rotation and proper placement. Definitely something I will work on in the future together with the main character. The game still needs a lot of work in the graphics department in general so I'm just putting what I have out there.