The use of redacted/ unredacted versions for players / referees is really cool! I also love the predictive-analysis briefing setup, which both cuts off clarifying questions (figure it out on the ground, you can't grill a printout) and provides a healthy dose of world building.
My biggest gripe is the plane list that takes up over a quarter of the page. Whatever program was used to make the PDF compressed that image down to the point that the text is illegible - I can tell there's SOMETHING going on there, probably related to Midnight Blade's special power, but there's no way to figure out what it says.