I quite like the characters. the writing is definitely sometimes a mouthful, sometimes over explain the plot, and sometimes is just a little over the top, but i think that just adds onto the charm. I especially like the characters, none more than Metatron. The dive into what it is to be and to feel is a concept im very attached to. The exploration of her character wrapping around human life and concepts while having trouble dealing with her own is just great to read, and seeing the glimpses of those emotions are also just phenomenal. I'm looking forward to more on this. Good job so far!!!
TBH, at some point I want to go back over the temple writing a bit more - it drags a little there at times.
Glad you're generally enjoying it though! Metatron and the Aether magic stuff gives me a lot of room to explore weird stuff and try to get fancy, I absolutely love writing all that. It's been really fun seeing people fall for Metatron, I'm grateful I got a chance to finally realize a character that had been stuck in my head for almost 10 years now!
Thank you for the kind words, hopefully next update will have more Metatron!