Game Title/URL: https://eelwaffles.itch.io/upgrades
Pitch/Information: A mutant survivor of Transigen copes with body dysmorphia. (X-Men AU Fic). It's an interactive twine fanfic with two endings dealing with themes of body modification, reclaiming one's body after trauma and coping with anxiety along with the stress of dealing with family.
I'd like feedback on: Grammer, world building, pacing, plot holes, the storyline itself, if the writing is engrossing.
I need help on: Keeping the storyline interesting.