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Kind of a copypaste of a comment under a comment but I ended up writing more than expected so worth posting as a full one I think.

Also could patches be released instead of full new versions? the full download can be somewhat heavy but it might require a lot lf work to make separate patches toupgrade  from the latest version to the new release.

anyways here's my constructive feedback

I wish we had more smaller and medium breasts among the main cast (Lily, Gwen etc.... are great and proportionate but definitely big) I think Lyx could use a reduction and Chloes size seems inconsistent, she's amazing in the bath tub scene but looks more like Jessica in the toilet doggystyle one, I'd especially like to have a more mature character more subtle proportions (basically the opposite of Pixie), pure elegance.


Dialogue options where your character doesn't react so turned on around Madison and such but acts more aroused around girls like Kana or Qarinah (whom the main character almost sounds to be fucking out of pity, loneliness or emotional attraction without any physical interest) if you've chosen to avoid the scenes with the thicker Milfs would be appreciated.

Thanks for your feedback - it's always useful to recieve!

Patches are already available if you use PC, Mac or Linux - just use the Itch app! :) Unfortunately, Android patches are impossible despite the community's best efforts to make them work.

Nobody is ever going to be 100% happy with the proportions of all the girls, and trying to please all of the people all of the time just leads to madness. All the girl's breasts are consistently sized, but obviously different positions will stretch or compact them in different ways.

The branching and nesting of if/else statements required to check who you've slept with and adjust the dialogue based on those variables plus who you're talking to would also lead to madness. Instead, what I have tried to do - and will expand upon during the final polish phase of the game - is to give a dialogue option for players to choose how they react during initial meetings (Madison already has this).

As a solo dev on a weekly schedule I have to be careful to the point of obsession on what I add to the game - a few minutes here, a few there, and suddenly there's no time in the week for the main update content. Thus, sadly, certain corners have to be cut.

Hope that answers your questions/concerns - if not to your satisfaction, then at least so you can understand why things are the way they are :)

Corners cut are the Typo Demon's lube.

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Felt the need to update;

I've progressed further into the game and unlocked the Demesnes, Morgana's servants and ownership of the College among other things.

I gotta say this has generously brought me the diversity I was lacking. The tournament practice in Asterias demesne for example, all 3 (technically 4) girls were different and appealed to one part of me or another, personally I prefer Zoe, it's cute how she stays around to help with the trainings, but all of them were great (Alexasteponme).

I also liked how Veronica and Madisons questline ended up, sure Madison is still around despite being constantly rejected but the changes that occurred in dialogue and the aftermath of Madison becoming her slave are fantastic.

Another thing that surprised me was how in-depth the childrens feature was despite being an Alpha, it gives more insight into the characters and it's great to see the motherly side of some girls.


Taking all of this into consideration, I believe you should try to rework act 1 before getting too far into the final phases of development, it's the first impressions and as it currently stands it fails at giving a proper look into what to expect from the game.

Also gib moar Jackie, she deserves to have as much fun as Jackie? with enough trust.


PD: Gran juego bro

I'm glad you're enjoying things more as they open up :) This is my first game, so a lot of the Prologue/Act One was me figuring out the SDK and modelling software, trying out ideas and seeing what worked and what didn't.

Once the game is in a beta state I'll be going back over the whole thing to polish, refine, add more events and generally bring the whole thing up to par. I'm expecting that to take a few months :P

Much more Jackie (plus Jackie?) to come in Act Three! Revelations abound!