I'm not a fan of story games, so it was surprising to me to enjoy it as well as I did. The writing was pretty good, but the end bit felt like some sentences were accidentally missed. Looks like you had fun making the game, it came through in the end result. Well done.
Thanks for playing the full story, we are glad you like it! It is true that sometimes it seems that some part of the end has been lost, but it is because the game procedurally generates the final text depending on your choices, and some of the sentences do not fit well with each other.
Thanks for the feedback! We will update it when the voting time ends :)
AfterJam Update! Fixed the final text :D
Thanked you at devlog ;)