You really play the story teller very well. I'd wish there was a bit more interactions in the demo. (Ones that just gives background but not change th story too much)
This is incredible!
Thank you for your video and commentary! I am going to take your critiques to heart! The demo ends right before the games starts branching and offers more choice and player freedom.
I feel incredibly humbled by your feedback and I will do my best to deliver the final version soon!