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Hey bdellium!

Congratulations on this project! I've been checking out the demo and for the most part I really liked it. I found the story "a bit" dense and overcomplicated initially, but that's a matter of personal taste. The character designs are nicely done! Although some styles between artists clashed a bit, perhaps. Overall, there game is aiming to have a lot of personality and trying to do its own thing! Which is something I appreciate above anything else. I'm also happy that you got so many downloads. This is one of those projects that, I believe, shows once more than there's an audience for this type of games out there. JUST two quick issues;

1) Maybe you found out about this one already but still I feel like reporting it, just in case. After the FIRST meeting with VIQUEL(?) - (can't remember the name exactly, but he's the somber, dark skinned guy with a beard) in the Praese's Residency, if you exit through the north door (with a guard on the right side) you will be taken to the courtyard/garden and unable to go back to the fort. There's three doors plus a fence and none of them take you anywhere.

2) Is there any VERY SPECIFIC way to beat the first Creature? I mean, IT's so cheap that at first I thought it was one of those scripted battles you're suppose to lose. I'm either doing something really wrong or the encounter has some SERIOUS balancing issues considering the available options. If it manages to paralize you and your health is below 75% you are most certain to meet death, lol. I've tried like 20 times already and counting to no avail! And I'm learning nothing from the encounter, as it doesn't behave on a specific manner that I notice and paralisys ratio of effect/success is very RANDOM! 

Still, I'm really enjoying what I played (until that point). Good luck with the project!! ^^

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Thanks for writing such extended feedback - I'll try and address all of your points, but don't hesitate to ask for further clarification if I haven't given enough detail.

To begin, I can definitely see how the opening could come across as too heavy with dry exposition and references with little context - however, that's also due to most of the setup being frontloaded; since the 'normal' order of things disintegrates very early on, so there's not as much opportunity to spread that background through the game in a place where certain characters can be seen interacting instead of it just being described second-hand.

Most of the introductions are taken care of in the demo, so hopefully you'll find the full game to move at a more streamlined pace.

I haven't heard that issue with the courtyard mentioned elsewhere, so I'll be sure to see what could be causing it - thanks for reporting it, even "obvious" seeming errors can be missed.

Regarding the chimera battle - you're right in seeing it as unwinnable, as like all chimera encounters in the full game, it's not possible to defeat it. To progress to the last scene of the demo, you have to choose the "submit" option that's added to the game over menu when you die a second time against it. 

The full game's chimera encounters progress normally from dying once, but the additional menu part for the first is intended to play off the frustration of repeating boss battles with unskippable cutscenes.

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Thank you for your reply!

I can totally understand what the problem was regarding that battle then, lol. It seems pretty unintuitive, having to lose twice to get the "Submit" option, specially when there's nothing leading you up to think it the second time around something like that will pop up, but you explained already your plans regarding it. Now I know I don't totally suck and have a way to proceed through the rest of the demo! ^^ I was really getting into the story (or so I thought).

I guess the problem with the other event "might" be that you used two identical maps and setted the teleport to the wrong one? I'm just guessing! Anyway, that's easily fixed.

The music, I forgot to mention, it's pretty atmospheric and gives the game a really uneasy vibe! Once again, well done with the demo. I'm so looking forward to the full release on May and I honestly wish you the best of luck with it!!