This is really cool, especially the two tracks and the two endings.
Here's my feedback:
1 - Deal 7 cards to each player and don't ever draw new ones. This means you will have to make tough choices about each situation (and if the game teeters on the edge, you won't have any choices at all about the last scene.) Also it means that you can look at your hand at the start of the game and get a sense of the personality and resolve of each character. If you get a bunch of black cards, guess what? Your character supports the status quo. How are you gonna deal with that in play? Tough questions.
2 - Expand out the paragraph about the star. I get that it's a metaphor between the players, but is it an actual star in the game? Maybe some prompting questions for us to discuss about the star. (Its appearance? Is it dangerous? Who found it? What are some of its properties?)
Great job, would definitely recommend/play this one!