Ah, don't get me wrong. I didn't mean there should be some crucial changes and important decisions. It's just my personal thing I guess - when playing VN I just like to have something to click after certain amount of text. Anyway it's not a bad thing, like I said, story was interesting and I enjoyed it. It was entertaining and easy to read.
Also I don't remember where exactly I noticed those third person/first person issues. There weren't many of those anyway, just a few. And it could be me not understanding something. Sometimes you refereed to the main character in description as he or him, I think two times was something like "Grant did something", when normally you it was "I did something".