Hehe. Thank you so much for the feedback :) Well, there ARE some future scenes written in the story - but I haven't gotten to them just yet. Be patient :)
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Nice game so far - I've been playing the tutorial in Story Mode - and I think I'm stuck? I was told to pick up berries by Takoda - and return to the campsite, but I returned to the first campsite, and dropped the berries inside the campsite. Then the tutorial says leave teh campsite, then when I do, it says 'return to the campsite"? Is there another campsite I missed near the bush I was supposed to harvest berries from?
ah yes. The choices thing makes perfect sense. It is my first VN that I've been working on seriously and adapting it from prose is a bit difficult at times. And I think I tracked the first/third person POVs down. There were at least 2-3 sentences altogether in chapter 5-6 I found esrlier today. Thank you for pointing them out! :)
Thank you. I have more chapters being worked on. I was curious what chapters you noticed those third person/first person issues? True. I could add more simple decisions, and there may be more later of those types, but right now, I feel if the story needs a decision at any point in it, I will create one. :) After all, this game IS an adaptation of my novel of the same name. :)