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Feedback for my first project

A topic by jonathan_schon created Jan 04, 2019 Views: 343 Replies: 3

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Hi guys,

I just uploaded a demo to my first project - a text-adventure called "Thirsty - The Thirst For Adventure". I uploaded it so I can get some feedback on it before I continue the development - I'd love to hear any thoughts you have about the writing, story design, random typos I missed or any other stuff you can think of.

Thank you so much in advance to those who'll help :)

Link: https://jonathan-schon.itch.io/thirsty

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GarBenjamin5 years ago(+2)

Hello! I am on my cell and took a quick look at the page. I recommend adding some screenshots / video so people have some idea of what to expect from the game. I know it is a text adventure but still I think most people will just click away thinking "there is nothing to hear or see here". I will try to remember to check it out to night when I can get on my home computer.

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jonathan_schon5 years ago(+1)

Thanks! I'm on my cell too but I'll definitely add some screenshots when I can. Thank for the feedback :)

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ChilliTech5 years ago

It's a fun game!

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