Played this. I'm not sure if it's the case, but I'm never comfortable criticizing games if they are about someone's experience or auto-biographic, so I'll keep it as light as I can. Please feel free to ignore me, this is just my opinion and taste.
Overall, even within the simplicity, the game was too dry and not very engaging in the text (which is pretty much all it has). There was not a lot for me to get attached to character-wise since it's only a handful of isolated situations out of context. Conceptually I support it, but as a character for me to like, no one here did much for me, it was just too short and barebones.
TL;DR as a game, I find it lacking. If it's mean to express someone's personal situation, it's not my place to criticize.