What an atmospheric story! The filtered photo bgs work really well, I love all the ominous sound effects, and the writing is really charming. I'm going to presume, based on the usage of 'mam' and the like, that the story takes place in Ireland?
The relationship between Claire and Jamie is well-realised too; you can really feel Claire's desperation to be liked. Her anxious thoughts and tendency to overthink all feel very #relatable.
I enjoyed it a lot, I think you did a great job! This story really is a gem! <3