Not sure how to indicate which exact location some of the typos appear in - but a couple of little typos I see repeated already - "muckus" should be "mucus", if what you are trying to describe is something like snot; and the word "ominous" (which is the correct spelling) appears as "omnious" (incorrect) in several places. Your english is much better than many games I've seen, especially with the large amount of text you have included!
If you could figure out a way to make a "close and save" which only worked one time and dropped you exactly where you left, that would be helpful, without giving any advantage. Or even a reliable "pause" function. :)
I keep getting severely injured, then having amazing luck - which is so funny. Like being near death and just taking one swing at the shakespeare and killing it in one! but then I have to go back to the last save anyway to get my companion back... lol
If you ever make a game where you decided to incorporate voice actors, I make audio dramas for my podcast and know many actors who would jump on a chance, just for the fun of it (for free). ;)