Though it seems to be alright, the translation needs to be cleaned up, and not enough here to give an actual rating. I do like the way the story seems to be heading. Keep up the good work.
Thanks.
Yes, I use an online translator. English is not my native language.
I might be able to help translate the game to English for you.
Thanks a lot. But i want to learn English as I develop novels.
Weird excuse... You won't learn English if nobody is there to correct your mistakes.
