Okay I just reached chapter 6 so I'm going ahead and posting my opinion. First the critiques. That's the easiest mostly I wouldn't mind seeing some more choices to at least give some interaction with it even if it doesn't really affect the story. Having enough player interaction could make or break any game. Couple of places here or there that some typos need to be fixed on but that's not a big deal. Finally the positive. The story is interesting and freaking adorable along with the characters. Every time you think you have a favorite girl a new one gets introduced and boom you have a new favorite. Most of them are so sweet and the dialogue of the main character is great as well. The story is very well written and I have to say a great job has been done in crafting each one of the characters unique personality. Looking forward to much more to come.
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This project has been very much a learning experience for me. As stated in the description of the title, it is a "mostly linear" experience, as I'm an author first and not much of a game designer lol. That being said, I've definitely been learning more and more about game design and coding within Ren'py itself, and Chapter 7 will feature a much more choice-heavy narrative, as that seems to be the chief request among many of the readers/players.
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