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Alright i'm getting a little confused. for one I can't go any deeper into the forest. Even though i'm bronze rank and they said I could Still can only hunt Those bores and those big birds  I also can't seem to find the guild sleeping quarters to continue other side quest With characters  

Went ahead and just now, downloaded it on the steam. I really love to bear witness, but is it weird that I'm really looking forward to the Easter eggs that are to come?

The discord link on the game page says it is invalid or has expired

I just found the page, so I'll have to buy it on steam when it's available. However, anyone that  paid money for this on itch is typically eligible for a steam key when the steam version comes out That's just standard practice You'll see all over Itch especially with adult games. Got to Figure something out for those that have already given you money under the promise of one day getting the full game.  

Well, the story certainly is interesting So far, and it's definitely clearly a very ambitious game Just from the startup. Honestly, I got a soft spot for vampire stories with AVNs at least those with good storytelling. It's early days so there's not a lot going on yet but I would say it needs a little bit more polish. Background music cleaner transitions for certain scenes.Maybe a little more shine on enemy attacks. Other than that, I would like a little more free will for character for Development. I can only assume that you intend for more of that early on. But there's a few chances even in the the part that's already released that you could have some moments to really make the character Your own. Example would be the classic showing restraint with your first victim. 

Beyond any of that, though, I'll hold out for future updates and see how this one goes. It's still early days, and i'm sure you got a lot more planned.Just take your time

Well I played through the current version. Yes, it's early days, so there's not a whole lot There but it's very clear to see that there is a lot of lore and world world building already. If you are of the type of person that likes story first, then this is definitely one to keep an eye on. 

Only a couple of things wouldn't mind seeing father's gift actually presented and a little bit of dialogue Around the mc's mindset on his thoughts on using it.

There was one and line of dialogue on the island where the game refers to the. Mc, as the default name, even if you changed it. 

Finally, the parts of the dialogue where a character is whispering. Just add that they are whispering and make the dialogue Bigger, because I have my laptop hooked up to a fifty five inch screen tv, and I still have to squint and lean forward to read it. 

Beyond all that, I'd say you're doing good work and have a great story on your hands. I greatly look forward to seeing this story Play out.

same but at the same time, she's the combination of a bunch of girls that love him but wasn't part of the original plan of the goddesses.

I knew there was a good reason why Jamie was my favorite

Oh you are in for one hell of a crazy ride just don't let yourself think for a moment you know what's going on because you never will

Well I'm definitely grateful for NoGlory for giving this one a rating so it would come across my feed. At first glance you'll think oh look another Harem game but damn does this have so much lore and story. Fair to say this one goes hard and I'm not talking about the MCs Dick. Having just finished everything so far I can see why chapter 3 took you 7 months a lot going on with that one. I would say it would be great if the chapters were labeled Or at least say when each chapter is at the end. Not just the end of the update but when the prologue is done it would be helpful to say that just so future readers / players know where they're at with the current content and can brace themselves for the inevitable end of the current version. Aside from everything looking beautiful and the animation as well as the art looking magnificent I only have one complaint. The whole thing with the MC constantly disappearing for some reason it's a little repetitive. At some point the dude needs to be there and not get yanked away to some random place again for a while. 

hey look at that I found gold! Not refined gold like a statue or something but like a gold nugget. Not perfect in shape or size but valuable nonetheless.

lets see...

1. art? Damn near breathtaking from the models to the scenery everything is crafted beautifully. 

2. story?  So far it's really good and there are definitely Mysteries to still in comfort of course since it's considered in the early days of development still. I'm really enjoying the setting and had actually recently been wanting to read a story that is a blend of fantasy futuristic as well cyberpunk genre.

3. The sexy scenes certainly are sexy and well animated. Aside from another character that I won't spoil here would really like the next intimate encounter be with a character that we the players have felt like we have built up a bond with over time.

4. Is more of a bad one but being an alien world at such a distant place it really breaks the immersion every time I see English. As far as I could tell so far a lower reason hasn't been given I'm guessing it's more to do with the assets at hand to build the world. But seeing Coca-Cola cans or certain someone holding a High School of the Dead manga makes me go.... " is this really not earth?"

So in conclusion aside from my number four I definitely would give this one a look even if it's early days. I mean come on how many early visual novels do you find with this much stuff early on??? You don't normally it's simple you could get the grasp of it in a few minutes but there's plenty of stuff here even though this is only the second installment of the story. In other words definitely download this one.

this is just one of those stories where you think you have a grasp of what's happening and then something else pops up that shatters your perception of what is happening in the story.  It's like a roller coaster where you can only see a foot in front of you so I recommend just enjoying the ride 

welp made it through the current playthrough! Got to say I don't know whether or not to be annoyed or grateful that this game hadn't made it to my radar until now. ( the wait for the updates would have driven me crazy and already are.) 

now for my posted review as a few others might have seen me do on a few other games. 

1. The story. Things seem rather simple at first but you will quickly find depth and development of all the characters. i give it about a 8 out of 10 on the crafting of the personalities for each of the characters. You'll find both silliness and depth alike depending on what's needed for the scene. 

2. Character models. As a whole the characters are beautiful. It may not be my favorite style to render images for visual novels however for this style and the program used I would call it top tier. 

3. Scenery. Honestly it was a little hard to notice that first since I quickly got in the habit of just using the map to click around everywhere but the backgrounds are modeled beautifully and help make the ship come alive more.  It is definitely worth it to take the time and click around at everything and ignore the map once or twice. 

4. Combat. Frankly I found it rather fun but I grew up on old school turn based games. I actually would love to see the space combat be a somewhat regular occurrence for the story.  I think it would be also a great idea to add some upgrades to Your Arsenal or new ships to construct that don't just pop up in the story.  Things that you could stumble upon by accident. You know secret bonus ships to summon to Aid you or rare materials to find that give the ship a boost. 

5.  sex... well what can I say this is an adult visual novel and whether the characters have their clothes on or off they are beautiful and the scenes are pretty sexy when you get to them.  Personal preference but I'm not a fan of the MC having a death stick that would send a woman to the hospital but I've seen worse so this one gets a pass. 

Final conclusion but mostly a message to the dev. Keep going and trust your instincts. Most if not all of my top 10 personal favorites have the same thing in common. They are anywhere from 75% to 90% story with the rest lewd. You've got a real talent for storytelling and building lore so just keep focusing on that. Don't worry you'll find places to keep things sexy when they're needed. 

side note but something should happen that lets the MC get a bump up in their rank. He's confident intelligent and a ace shot. With everything going on and those qualities in mind he can't stay a private forever. 

I finished the new update and I loved it. Artemis has been in my top 10 for quite a while and I'm already itching for the next update! Alas I will have to be patient because if anything you have shown that being patient for your updates is well worth it for the quality of work that comes out of it. good job on this update a masterpiece as always!

AAAHHHHH ITS HERE!!!!!! YEEEEESSSSS!!!!!!!!!!

Also probably won't affect me if the old save doesn't load since I'll probably just start over from the beginning to refresh my memory on everything anyway. Hell every few months I replay this story anyway just because it always brings a smile to my face. also Kendra equals best girl!

everything good??????

oh just wait..... gets crazy

AAAAAHHHHHH ITS BACK!!!!!!!

give the tree the milk ( i love this game)

AAAAAHHHHHH ITS HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!

okay that video gave me goosebumps! I'm going to share this every single place I can and I already added it to my wishlist on Steam! Your effort and passion is clear as ever and I can't wait to see the future of this project!

guess it's time to do another playthrough. Missed the writing and of course I missed the beautiful Zoey

I'm curious will Onyx be making a appearance before the end of the chapter? Want to see some power

hope everything's going well SMG! Every once in awhile I got to do a replay of what you have out so far to remind myself just how good this story is. So much depth in each and every single character with wonderfully written personalities. The amount of lore  is insane and you have to pay attention every time you replay it because you just might miss a detail. I've said this about other stories and I'm going to say it about yours. This story deserves to be told! There's so many half-assed sleazy and lazy AVNs out there but you have something really incredible here. Every click of the mouse just sucks you in deeper no matter how many times you played it. When I try and get a friend into adult visual novels this is one of the games I always put on the list of suggestions to get others to understand how incredible the stories are out there that they miss out on. 

So again I say I hope you are doing well and that the development is going smoothly for you. Be safe SMG!

you did a great job cleaning up the clarity on the animations and fixing the sound.( think the audio might be missing from the bondage magic circle.)

I mentioned in my first comment on your main page about adding story elements. If you reach your point where you're still racking your brain for ideas I would love to put you the story that kept popping in my head roaming around what you have so far.

No problem at all and thank you for taking the time to reply to my comment! my mind is honestly bristling with ideas but I'm going to try and just be patient to see what Direction You Go.

All right so I took a quick look around goofed off for a bit. 

First the good. Overall the vibe character model and scenery seems pretty good to me. You've done a good job designing not only the character but also the surrounding area that you can explore so far.

Though there's not a lot to do so far except goof off with some dildos and the moaning was very quiet. Also the animation interacting with a dildos was very blurry.

But honestly just the vibe alone and the work you put in I feel like you're sitting on a gold mine of potential here if you were to see it through. Honestly kind of like the idea of a powerful Gothic sorceress who used to spend her days lounging around in her mansion using that very magic to just get off to keep boredom away. " ooh a new spell?... how can I use this to get off?"  Here are some personal suggestions.

1. Get you some story established first off. An opening with a reason why you'll be solving puzzles. Lower notes and journals to find along with it stuff like that. 

2. Get some character creation in there let people modify the way the character looks and not just the clothing. 

3. I would add at least a single enemy that is your goal to reach. Like she's supposed to be going through these puzzles maybe somebody locked her out of her own house and she needs to get to them and teach them a lesson. 

weird maybe I'm going crazy. Could have swore the last update also ended with a sex scene with a certain barista if you chose that route.. 

LOL definitely should have paid attention to the update notes I thought I was going crazy when a few things were slightly different. Wish there was further story progression in this update but I can definitely respect taking the time to polish up what you've already made. Too many Developers don't take the time to go back and fix Little Things. Keep up the good work hopefully the next update isn't too far down the road. Side note though I swear you had a Discord.... am I going crazy or did it get deleted or something?

okay I haven't reached chapter 5 yet but is a Tracker menu ever going to be put in? Like something that keeps track of how much on the light and dark path you're on as well as how the relationship is going with the different girls? Got multiple saves going on and I don't want to get them mixed up and it would be really helpful to have something like that so I don't save over a playthrough where I am going for a particular relationship path.

Other than that Peak game and wonderful story that keeps you sucked in with beautifully rendered models and scenery.

its here

YYYYEEEEEEESSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!

Quick question! Am I the only one that kind of wants the first boss battle nerfed? I tried for like an hour and nothing. I know there's the option to skip the battle but last time I did that honestly it took the wind out of me to continue playing....

Paid the full $10 ? if so scroll up hit the download button next to where it says that you purchased the game for $10 you'll have three download options choose the third one that says 0.5.1b

I give the game four stars but I always give the details of my rating in the comments. Models are gorgeous and if there was any clipping issues in their design I didn't spot any. Frankly the story is way more intriguing than the game page leads you to believe with the mystical side of this visual novel. The element of " okay wait what is happening ?" is definitely present and I didn't see it coming when looking at the game page. Now why 4 and not 5? Has to do with the only real issue I have and it's a common issue which is pacing. I know there's a supernatural element involved but if there had been at least a Time skip of a week it wouldn't have felt so odd at times. The dialogue and everything is wonderfully written and different personalities captured very well. But I would have liked to have seen at least the illusion that sometime had passed and  theMC had gotten time to know the characters at least in the background. But that's my personal taste I just always found the hole I know we just met but I think I love you thing kind of weird and jarring.

That being said I still think this visual novel is worth downloading to anyone who is a fan of erotic visual novels and I will be purchasing the paid version of the game in the coming days soon. 

holy crap short but powerful for sure. keep making more you have talent!

how come the Sprite used for Natasha is a black girl but the character image is just a basic white girl? Feels weird and kind of a bit of a letdown.....