Rating using the Judge categories, just for fun
Gameplay
This game is more about the story and world than it is about the gameplay. However, the battles were made in a really unique way that I could see getting expanded greatly in the future
I wasn't a fan of the controls. Never liked Enter and Esc as confirmation and back keys.
It was a little difficult to see the exit of the mine at first. Specially when the game teleported you to a different section for a cutscene. The interactable objects in general need more visual indication of their existence, like how the mining spots shine
The game flow was mostly good, but after being attacked by the 3 guards, I felt confused as to where to go and got lost for a while
Overall a great gameplay experience, even for a story focused game
[16/20]
Presentation
Stellar. The game got me invested in its environment, story and characters in no time. The hopelessness theme could get heavy handed at times, but it still made a big impact.
The story was interesting and kept the intrigue to the very end, although there were some pacing issues when miners who were totally hopeless and scared on day 1 were suddenly super optimistic the next day. Conversely, the incredible sense of despair after the failed revolution was very well conveyed. I just think the transition from hopelessness to optimism could have been more gradual
Music fit the theme like a glove and was nice overall. Sound effects did a good job
Characters were good for the most part, albeit kind of repetitive in their themes. Also, it was strange how only the main character and another character near the end had portraits. They almost felt a little out of place
[18/20] -> Doubled to 36
Engagement
The world and narrative kept me going. I wanted to see where everything was going. The battle system also complemented the storytelling greatly, so it just gave me more reason to reach the end. A little bit of guidance is needed to keep less attentive players going however
[16/20]
Potential
The world you painted here was really interesting, and the battle mechanic is both original and very fitting to the kind of experience I think you were going for. This can certainly stand out as a full indie game with the full story completed. Certainly not for everyone however
[17/20]
Total: 85/100 (5 Stars)