Thank you so much for the review, Dark Paladin X! I'm happy you liked it.
You're right, I'm new to Ren'Py. I've done corporate programming before, but I haven't used Python, and it's true that I probably did a lot of things backwards.
Your feedback really encourages me to start work on the next visual novel. Please give me a few hints where those rough edges are; it would help a lot. I'll fix them in the next one ^^
You can write here or send me email to love.little.viktoria@gmail.com . Thank you again!