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Such an interesting Visual Novel, I would never, in all my life would have come with the idea of a game about a girl obsessed with pockets falling in love with the CEO of a bag company, such a dramatic and cinematic tale, would totally watch a rom-com show about this.

Things I really liked about this game: The music, it has a wide variety of it and it fits most of the situations quite nicely, specially that fashion parade theme! I am literally listening to it while writing this. I also enjoyed the multitude of choices we get to make during the story, I am not quite sure if all of them matter but it feels nice to have a saying in what happens.

The art is nice, and I can really appreciate animated portraits and of course the cute chibi CGs!

The story even though it's mostly fun jokes and problem solving, has some really meaningful moments that I am not gonna spoil here but they are nice for a change of pace.

In the not so bright side, I felt the story dragged too long in some parts, and the (In my opinion) over description of some situations didn't help, is not too bad, and maybe it felt worse because I was speaking the lines out loud, and I usually play with a time limit but is definitely something to keep in mind.

Also I would have loved to see a portrait/sprite of the mother or Priya since they are quite relevant characters.

Overall I think this is a VN definitely worth looking into if you like to have fun or just read interesting original stories.

Keep the good work!

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Hi Moriko, thank you for doing a full playthrough. Wow, that was epic! I hope your voice is okay nearly 3 hours later. I appreciate your dedication reading the lines. I'm happy you liked the art - the computer graphics cut scene, the chibi's, the logo, as well as the choices, the music. Thanks for noticing the animation with blinking, my programmer will be delighted! Thanks for your feedback, I do hope to keep getting better with writing, sorry to hear some parts dragged for you. I hope to tighten up the writing for future.  I'd love to have sprites for the main character's mother and Priya, unfortunately Otome Jam was only 2 months long and we ran out of time. I'm chuffed you noticed how key those supporting characters were. Here's the link to the fashion catwalk soundtrack you liked: https://blairdevx.bandcamp.com/track/pockets-on-the-runway