Yoshika obtained. Congrats on your first solo entry, I really like the CG's and backgrounds in this!

The art is the best part on this, I hoped a bigger plot twist at the end, so I think it fell a little short, but it was an accurate representation of the characters.

A little short story that could need a little more work and routes, but it works great as a concept.

I found my Yoshika.

...she kind of exploded though.

A short and sweet game. Writing could have been improved and extended way more, but the art was cute and presentation is overall decent. Good work!

As was said before, short and sweet. The writing was far from perfect, but it does the job. Also, more games should start with a character's hat falling off and catching fire. Great way to begin any story, really.

I love the art style in particular. The characters vaguely remind me of Seinen manga, and the backgrounds have a lovable sketchy charm to them.

The choices clearly don't matter, which I think is fine by itself-- my main complaint is that there could've been a bit more flair for the "wrong" choices. Even a little pun, or a line of dialogue being changed in the final scene would be enough. The short little dialogue with Reisen works though, and I think more of that kind of dry humor would help.

In short, 'twas nice.

i did not know yoshika was a minecraft zombie that explodes in the daytime, but that explains a lot about why everybody has a hat. probably the same for remilia

i see that in the path selection and choosing who to talk to at the bar, it shows the other two options after you pick one of them. at first it seems like its getting rid of options youve selected before but then they show up again when you pick something else. i appreciate the intent but it would be best if you went all the way with some flags or just always showed all the options

personally i do not acknowledge ".." as a valid expression in anything other than lua (not english) so that bothered me but not a huge deal

anyway sorry for complaining its neat i like it and all the art is very nice, i like the detail and the departure from your average anime artstyle

keep at it

Very short, but very sweet. Lovely art style too :)