The backgrounds and character graphics are truly gorgeous. (Though I really think you should pick a nicer font for the text, it is so plain and boring by comparison that it looks out of place).
To be honest, at first I thought there was too much text, especially as you weren't able to implement the interactive parts yet. But I did, as you said in your placeholder text, enjoy the story very much. The characters are fun and quirky and I got invested in them. Jemry has good taste too 😇