Itch has comments? I guess, I'll create an account and give you praise because I'm amazed at how there is a femdom (!) content creator who goes for a year after year (!) without getting worse but instead getting better (!). My two kopiykas - what I hated in Mantis, Mistresses of the Forest, Femdom Town, or those text-based games with sex fighting systems (and, conversely, loved the opposite in Slave High or Android Life) was that there was grind - namely, a gameplay loop that turned lewd scenes into a mechanical click-fest. Simply stated, in my view, the game should not turn its femdom content into busywork, and instead reward it for the choices the player makes. (Although Mantis does try to skirt around this issue by giving the player both the money and relevant character-developing scenes, in Uptown.)
Other than that, this is shaping up to become a masterpiece in every single category imaginable. Hot renders, character psychology, internal logic, captivating plot... I should probably join your Discord (2 years too late) to see some real critique and the nitty-gritty of game development. (Inb4 people there beg for maledom or more futa, breaking my heart.)
Regarding the dialogue options - I didn't notice they influenced anything at all, acting more as an irrelevant distraction from the scene? And I just noticed that Vivian has a feminisation scene on this page - was it not in the demo? (I feel an urge to whine that there should be a feminisation-free Vivian route, I should stop.)
And for the final note, that scene in the office captured and transmitted so well the feeling of real-world anxiety I myself had a chance to experience when dealing with a dominant female once, it's incredible. So yeah, psychology and character traits are apparently important to me, autism notwithstanding.